Death Of 1000 Cuts - Episode 5

Each episode I take a look at a novice author's first page and give advice on how to make it less bad. 'I' being me, Tim Clare, author of THE HONOURS and WE CAN'T ALL BE ASTRONAUTS, erstwhile stand-up poet and occasional singist. Please buy my novel, The Honours: https://wordery.com/the-honours-tim-clare-9781782114765#oid=1908_1