Death Of 1000 Cuts - Season 2 Episode 20 - Untitled by M (1st Page Critique)

In this episode author Tim Clare takes a look at a listener's first page and suggests ways to make it better. This is a great episode to listen to if you want to know: - how can I be a better self-editor? - how can I make my world-building great? - what sort of things should I think about when designing a planet? - what are good ways to introduce a character in a novel? - how should I think about the 'flow' of a sentence? If you enjoy this episode then for gawd's sake buy me book, THE HONOURS: https://wordery.com/the-honours-tim-clare-9781782114765#oid=1908_1 And help me keep the podcast going by laying a few hot pence down on me via this handy-dandy site: https://ko-fi.com/timclare Thank you!